Lilypad on
garden pond
stands still
Your eye sighs
yellow flowers stir
in summer wind
Look deeper
A water bug
quivers
a slow move
of orange rolls
under the surface
Closer still
your eye
and a name
is it yours?
Inky Cat's Poems
Poems from a leaking pen
Inky Cat's Poems 
I like the contrast between movement and stillness in your poem.